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In the morning, I went to Epcot for the first time. It was very exciting lining up and waiting for the gates to open. After getting inside, I followed the people into the Soarin ride. The Soarin was a lot of fun, as it was a cool flight simulator. Next , I went over to Spaceship Earth, which was also blast. Spaceship Earth is a slow-moving 16-minute ride that takes you on a time machine themed experience using the Omni mover system. Over the course of my day, I visited all of the other rides and shows and then I took a walk around the butterfly garden.